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Assessment 3: Write a Paragraph Below is an excerpt of a press release from the Department of Health. Read it and do the task that follows.

YOUR MIND MATTERS: DOH CALLS FOR UNIFIED RESPONSE TO MENTAL HEALTH
Press Release | 10 October 2020

With the pandemic having a considerable impact on global mental health, the Department of Health (DOH) today called for a unified response to improve mental health care in the country in observance of this year’s World Mental Health Day.

According to the World Health Organization (WHO), mental and behavioral disorders

account for about 14% of the global burden of disease and as many as 450 million people

suffer from these illnesses. The Philippine WHO Special Initiative for Mental Health

conducted in the early part of 2020 shows that at least 3.6 million Filipinos suffer from one

kind of mental, neurological, and substance use disorder.

Source: YOUR MIND MATTERS: DOH CALLS FOR UNIFIED RESPONSE TO MENTAL HEALTH, Department

of Health, accessed Aug. 11, 2021, https://doh.gov.ph/press-release/YOUR-MIND-MATTERS-DOH-CALLS-

FOR-UNIFIED-RESPONSE-TO-MENTAL-HEALTH

Task:

As mentioned above, some Filipinos suffer from poor mental health. If you have a

friend who struggles emotionally, what would you advise to him or her that may help him or

her to get through the situation? Give your advices in a form of persuasive paragraph.

RUBRICS FOR THE PARAGRAPH

EXPECTATIONS Excellent

(4 points)

Good

(3 points)

Fair

(2 points)

Needs Improvement

(1 point)

Ideas

Ideas are clear

and organized. It

is easy to figure

out what the

paragraph is

about.

Ideas are

expressed in a

clear manner,

but the

organization

could have been

better.

Ideas are

somewhat

organized but

are not very

clear.

The paragraph

seems to be a

collection of

unrelated sentences.

It is very difficult to

figure out what the

paragraph is about.

Usage of Verbs

The paragraph

contains 5-6

verbs which are

appropriately

used.

The paragraph

contains 4 verbs

which are

appropriately

used.

The paragraph

contains 3 verbs

which are

appropriately

used.

The paragraph

contains 2 or less

verbs which are

appropriately used.

Sentences

The paragraph

contains 5 – 7

sentences.

Sentences are

complete and

well-constructed

The paragraph

contains 4

sentences.

All sentences

are complete

and well-

constructed

The paragraph

contains 3

sentences.

Most sentences

are complete

and well-

constructed

The paragraph only

contains 1 – 2

sentences.

paamswer po ng tama thankyou in advance ❤️​

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